Estella Hua

20190410 花咏恒口语打卡http://video.passions.com.cn/lg4cMFXeaRTol4xMaRxZN5eNfT49.mp4http://video.passions.com.cn/lpwvW9Ncvh64BPikFzMgg1xNHRCO.mp4

danielzeng

回答得很不错，句型，短语的多样性都有了。接下来聊一下一些问题。第一题里really 发得不太好，influence的重音应该在第一个，要特别注意重音。 一个语法错误就是teach sb to do sth。 你这里应该是taught them to feel。。。 接下来有一个句子我觉得最好可以这样说。everytime they got new understandings, I derived a great sense of achievement from every progress we made together. derive sth from sth 从xx获得得到xx。
第二题based on my own experience, own这个词你有点发成owen了。还有一句话我觉得这样说会更好：it was those missing/absent arms that made it unique and perfect. 继续加油哈。