左沐熙

口语机经

1. If you are to choose between two apartmentsto live in next semester, one apartment is near the campus but slightlyexpensive, the other is a little far from the campus but cheaper, which one doyou prefer and why?

2. Some studentsthink that they are graded by participating in the discussion class, whileothers think that they are graded only by written work, such as paper. Whichopinion would you prefer and give your reasons.

2123813532

http://oe.passions.com.cn/data/appbyme/upload/audio/201902/25/6LVdy0MwPS9U.mp3

2123813532

http://oe.passions.com.cn/data/appbyme/upload/audio/201902/25/h34oJclSNOw6.mp3

danielzeng

2123813532 发表于 2019-2-25 23:22

结构可以，节奏也不错。发音上train my body的train发的不太好，元音ei和e的区别。有个毛病是用了太多的because of，你可以多找其他词去替换。比如在表达观点的时候 I choose xxx for（替代because of） two reasons. 一个是一些地方的逻辑上。比如应该是although it is a little far away from the campus, I can ride bicycle to the campus to train my body。 第二个观点部分，作为学生，没有太多钱去租近的贵的房子，你这里用dont have much money是可以，但比较native的可以用cant afford to xxx会比较地道。平时需要多积累一些地道的说法，即使知道了也要多去练习才能内化成自己掌握的语言。

danielzeng

2123813532 发表于 2019-2-25 23:20

’这两篇开头表达“”依我来看“”都一样，可以适当换一换，什么in my opinion， as for me, as far as I am concerned之类的。 单词written发错了，去查一查怎么发音，不要想当然哈。