katel

山姆大叔Tony 发表于 2015-6-18 22:47

好的，多谢建议和指正～我会注意的。留心积攒句型和词组，尝试模仿运用。

katel

山姆大叔Tony 发表于 2015-6-18 22:47

根据建议修改后～ ^_^ （默默觉得有点类似于外国人学中文磨合期的囧……笑～代入一下就体会到老师你的无奈了。）
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山姆大叔Tony

katel 发表于 2015-6-20 15:37
根据建议修改后～ ^_^ （默默觉得有点类似于外国人学中文磨合期的囧……笑～代入一下就体会到老师你的无 ...

katel

山姆大叔Tony 发表于 2015-6-21 10:50

Ok,I got it.

Maggy

It is very miserable to walk a long distance to take a bus or waite for a long time in a cold climate.
You could go anywhere you like on your own if you have your own car.
If having no private car you yourself，the possibility that you are late for work will be comparatively higher when you rely on other's driving.
Although the flight time is short,the time for boarding and the distance between the train station and the central city are much farther.

山姆大叔Tony

Maggy 发表于 2015-7-2 15:44
It is very miserable to walk a long distance to take a bus or waite for a long time in a cold climat ...

尹娜

when you have car ,you can go the place ,you want Needn't depend on others

山姆大叔Tony

尹娜 发表于 2015-7-30 09:04
when you have car ,you can go the place ,you want Needn't depend on others

when you have car ,you can go the place ,you want Needn't depend on others

去想去的地方可以说wherever you wanna go

你不需要可以说 you don't need to

注意修改咯

李冬琦

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李冬琦

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