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写作：产量可以写作volume of production, 句子可写成The volum of production of bikes amounted to 44.74 million in China. 英语中也比较常用被动语态，整个句子也可以改为 In 1995, up to 44.74 million bicycles were made in China. as做连词时后面引导的是从句，所以要么把as替换成with, 后加名词短语构成介词短语做状语。到2000年，可以不必那么直译，直接写in 2000就好，when time comes to 有些翻译腔。health的比较级healthier. 生活方式lifestyle是一个词。become后不用加to。元作为货币单位，后面不加复数。为使and前后连接的词对称，可以把更多功能的功能名词转换成形容词functional，与后面的专业的professional对应。最后一句话Bicycles now manufactured by some of the world's first-class automakers are gradually gaining in popularity. Bikes are made by world top car producers getting more and more popular. 问题在于主句bike are made...后面接getting的部分有语法上的错误。可以在are made by前加that构成定语从句，getting前加are，使语法正确。