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Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:41

How do you usually spend your spare time?

Shirley123

Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:46
How do you usually spend your spare time?

why do some young people dislike living with old people?

Shirley123

Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:50
why do some young people dislike living with old people?

Do you like to spend time on your own or with your family/friends?

Angela_passions

Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:41

不错，有进步，注意一些介词，比如on sunny days… 另外，也可以说tough time… 艰难的时光

Angela_passions

Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:46
How do you usually spend your spare time?

慢跑可以用jogging… 比running更形象

Angela_passions

Shirley123 发表于 2016-5-23 09:50
why do some young people dislike living with old people?

可以从life style，年轻人喜欢新鲜东西，老年人喜欢传统的，这是一个状态描述，但你要拓展到深层次的原因，为什么这样的状态会造成隔阂呢？比如思想的不同，比如生活习惯不同。不要只是单纯描述一种表象，要把他们往因果逻辑上套。