Angela_passions

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今天要描述的是：一个会说外语的人

我今天想要介绍我的外教，Jack. 他很高，也很结实，还有强壮的肌肉，标准的欧美人身材，性格也很典型，幽默，自信。总体来说，他是个非常有吸引力的人。
我的很多同学都很喜欢他的课，我也是。在我大学第二学期的时候我选了他的课。一开始，我并没有感受到他的特别之处，但到后来，我渐渐地能体会到他确实是一个有能力让课堂变得有趣的人，因为他很擅长通过说一些笑话来调节课堂气氛。同时，他也是个一个有创意的人，他总能想到很多新奇的点子让我们提高对应于的兴趣，从而提升英语水平。
在课下，我偶尔会找他聊天，不止用英语，偶尔也用中文，因为他在学中文。通过和他的交流，不单单是我的英语水平有提高，我同时也对西方文化有了更多认识。

katel

Ok then,I guess I could start off by answering who is that person and the one I’d pick is my friend,Lily.She is a bilingual speaker,and she is so charming as well as attention-getting,likes the faire of many boys’dream.
Now concerning the matter of which language she speak,and what I ought to stress here is that because she can speak both fluent mandarin and Japanese. In fact,when I first met her,I mistook her for a Japanese girl,since she not only spoke proficient Japanese but was truly immersed in Japanese cultural.Initial impression about she,you know,a typical Japanese temperament.
Moving onto the business of how she learn the language,I suppose I should underline the fact that she has studied Japanese for five years since middle school,and now she still practices her listening,reading and speaking from time to time,by watching Japanese TV series and animations every week.Besides,she often hangs out with Japanese friends,enjoy sushi sashimi and Japan hot pot.About learn a second language, she emphasized that the key of master a language is to understand related culture.

katel

想要问一下,可以以这种结构作答吗？就是一开始用一个很长的句子先说问题，之后内容似乎就可以少描述些矣……口语渣，真心忧伤。
从《雅思考官口语实战指导》看到的，但是看到大家似乎都是叙述式和实例故事式的语言居多，所以有点茫然矣，不确定能否使用……求解疑惑。

Angela_passions

katel 发表于 2015-6-1 15:15
Ok then,I guess I could start off by answering who is that person and the one I’d pick is my friend ...

那你这段是自己写出来的吗？结构上来说，其实考官还是要听到实质内容的，当然你可以用一些方法来遮掩自己的弱项，但是内容如果没有的话逻辑如果没有的话，分数不会高的。下次你可以说出来不用纯打字

katel

Angela_passions 发表于 2015-6-1 16:57
那你这段是自己写出来的吗？结构上来说，其实考官还是要听到实质内容的，当然你可以用一些方法来遮掩自己 ...

好的～部分是自己写的。因为觉得文字比较直接，能看出语法问题……求指正！下次会直接说的～

Angela_passions

katel 发表于 2015-6-1 17:14
好的～部分是自己写的。因为觉得文字比较直接，能看出语法问题……求指正！下次会直接说的～

其实第一句话真的不用那么长的，你如果想用长句来多增加点内容的话，首先前提是你的语法得保证争取，然后如果语法不过关的话，长句很可能会出现语法错误，这是得不偿失呀~

katel

Angela_passions 发表于 2015-6-1 17:40
其实第一句话真的不用那么长的，你如果想用长句来多增加点内容的话，首先前提是你的语法得保证争取，然后 ...

确实是。前面的长句来自书上的例子，然后担心自己填在后面的内容与之水平不相当……反露怯。而且确实觉得开头太长有点怪怪的……头重脚轻矣。

Angela_passions

katel 发表于 2015-6-1 18:35
确实是。前面的长句来自书上的例子，然后担心自己填在后面的内容与之水平不相当……反露怯。而且确实觉得 ...

其实你看看口语标准，排在第一的是流利度和连贯程度，其次是词汇和语法，这就要求你把流利度放在第一位，连贯程度可以通过一些连接词，诸如in addition, besides, and then这样来实现，词汇和语法的话，首先你得保证不出错，考官经验丰富，一个人的英语水平如果在一段话中表现得参差不齐，他是肯定看的出来的，如果说你对自己的英语没有信心，可以试着用一些简单点的句子，没有说一定要用高大上的长难句。

Angela_passions

I’d like to describe a foreign teacher of mine, Bob. He is tall and strong, with strong muscles. He is a typical American—confident and humorous. He is a very attractive man.

A lot of my classmates liked his class very much. I also chose his course in the second year of my university. At first, I didn’t feel there was anything special about him. Later, I found that he really had the ability to make his class interesting because he was so funny and good at telling jokes. He was also creative. He had so many new ways for us to practice our English.
After class, I like talking with him in both Chinese and English because he also learned some Chinese. Through communicating with him, I learned a lot about western culture.

I need to thank him. Because of him, I feel that English is actually a fun subject to learn. My interest in English grew and now I’m still interested in learning language.

katel

Angela_passions 发表于 2015-6-2 09:24
其实你看看口语标准，排在第一的是流利度和连贯程度，其次是词汇和语法，这就要求你把流利度放在第一位， ...

确实如此～仔细想想，归根究底还是需要加强基础，多多练习。花招只能是锦上添花的东西。捂脸。